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Crystal tears of the fallen sky.
Dropping down, down, down.
Splashing with that of ice,
Touching those of internal heat.
Sizzeling with defiance.

Tears grace green.
Waters crystalize all.
Sun rains down.
Colors shimmer.
Bathing everything in light.

The Earth breathes,
And sighs with pleasure.
Shivers and drips.
Sweet mist rolls in.

Wind smelling of the evergreens.
Entrapped in a world of wonder.
Whispering it's happiness,
Shouting it's joy.
             - Taylor Huskey (5th poem)

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:iconparadox-dream:
I really enjoyed reading this
I love your style, but then again, I, love, love, love symbolism and your poems are always full of it :icongrin--plz:
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~ht166539 Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :love:
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:iconparadox-dream:
^^ you're welcome =D
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:iconshadowsoflosthope:
Too much punctuation interrupts the flow within poetry since each one marks a pause. This poem even without that had little rhythm or flow, and a rhyme scheme felt as if it needed to be in place though i relatively enjoyed the theme.
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~ht166539 Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your advice. This poem is really old, but thanks anyway. :D
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